freefix-email.json
1 { 2 "fine_print_spintax": "{We {found|came across} your {contact details|contact info} on your {website|site} while {researching|looking at} businesses in your {area|industry}. If this email {missed the mark|wasn't relevant}, we'd {genuinely|really} appreciate {your feedback|any feedback}.|Your business {came up|showed up} in a Google search, and we thought {what we do|our service} might be {useful|helpful}. If we {got it wrong|missed the mark}, {please let us know|feel free to tell us} how we can {do better|improve}.|We {came across|found} your business online and {noticed|spotted} a few things on your {site|website} we {can|could} help with. If this isn't {relevant|useful}, we apologize — {feel free to let us know|happy to hear your thoughts}.|We {discovered|found} your {website|site} while {looking at|researching} businesses in your {industry|space} and {wanted to|thought we'd} reach out. If this {isn't|wasn't} {helpful|useful}, we'd love {to hear how we can improve|any feedback on how we can do better}.|Your {site|website} {caught|drew} our attention during a Google search for businesses {like yours|in your industry}. If this email isn't {useful|helpful|of interest}, we {welcome|would love to hear} your feedback so we can {do better|improve}.}", 3 "templates": [ 4 { 5 "id": "freefix_email_01_ca", 6 "channel": "email", 7 "author": "[persona_name]", 8 "country": "CA", 9 "subject_spintax": "{FYI: {noticed|spotted} something on [domain]|quick thing about [domain]|FYI: [domain]}", 10 "body_spintax": "{{Hi|Hey|Hello} [firstname|there]{,|!}\n\n|}{I was {looking at|going through} [domain] {earlier|this morning} and {noticed|spotted} your [weakness] — {it's a pretty {common|easy-to-miss} one|not an obvious thing, but it matters}.|{Came across|Stumbled across} [domain] {yesterday|recently} and something {jumped out at me|caught my eye}: your [weakness]. {Most [industry] sites have the same issue|It's one of those things that flies under the radar}.}\n\n{I've already written up a fix for it — {takes about|it's maybe} {2 minutes|5 minutes} to {apply|drop in}.|I went ahead and put together {a specific fix|the fix} you can {apply|use} yourself. No {developer|coding} knowledge needed.|I've {actually|already} prepared {the fix|a solution} — straightforward enough that anyone on your team could {handle it|apply it}.}\n\n{{Just reply and I'll send it over|Reply and I'll get it over to you} — no strings attached.|{Happy to|Glad to} send it over if you want it. No catch.|Say the word and I'll {send|forward} it {over|your way} — {completely|totally} free.}\n\n{Thanks|Best}", 11 "tone": "direct", 12 "approach": "noticed-wrote-want-it", 13 "tested": false, 14 "conversions": 0, 15 "sends": 0, 16 "language": "en" 17 }, 18 { 19 "id": "freefix_email_02_ca", 20 "channel": "email", 21 "author": "[persona_name]", 22 "country": "CA", 23 "subject_spintax": "{FYI: {gap|issue} in your Google {listing|presence}|your [domain] Google listing|something {missing|off} in your Google listing}", 24 "body_spintax": "{{Hi|Hey|Hello} [firstname|there]{,|!}\n\n|}{There's {a gap|something} in how [domain] {shows up|appears} {on Google|in search} that {most [industry] businesses|a lot of [industry] sites} {don't realize is there|miss entirely}.|The way [domain] {presents|comes across} in Google results {isn't quite right|has a gap} — and it's the kind of thing {most [industry] businesses|nearly every [industry] site} {overlooks|never picks up on}.}\n\n{Specifically: [weakness]. {It's a small thing but it compounds|Sounds minor but it adds up over time}.|Here's the issue: [weakness]. {On its own it seems minor, but over weeks it quietly {eats into|chips away at} your traffic.|Doesn't seem like much until you realize how many potential {customers|visitors} it's {diverting|sending} elsewhere.}}\n\n{I've already drafted a fix for exactly this — {literally a {2-minute|5-minute} change|something you {or anyone on your team|or your web person} could do today}.|I put together {the fix|a specific fix} — {nothing complicated, just a clear change|your web {person|developer} could {apply|drop} it in {under an hour|a few minutes}}.}\n\n{Want me to send it over?|Just reply and I'll get it over to you.|Reply and it's yours — no catch.}\n\n{Thanks|Best}", 25 "tone": "curious", 26 "approach": "curiosity-gap-google", 27 "tested": false, 28 "conversions": 0, 29 "sends": 0, 30 "language": "en" 31 }, 32 { 33 "id": "freefix_email_03_ca", 34 "channel": "email", 35 "author": "[persona_name]", 36 "country": "CA", 37 "subject_spintax": "{quick {improvement|win} for [domain]|one thing to {fix|change} on [domain]|FYI: quick {win|fix} for [businessName]}", 38 "body_spintax": "{{Hi|Hey|Hello} [firstname|there]{,|!}\n\n|}{I {was reviewing|had a look at|took a look at} [domain] {and found|and noticed} something worth flagging.|I came across [domain] {recently|the other day} and {one thing|something} stood out.|Had a look at [domain] {this week|recently} — {one thing|something} {worth mentioning|worth a quick heads-up}.}\n\n{Your [weakness] {could be stronger|is {a bit|slightly} underdone|is {holding|probably holding} you back a little}. {In plain terms|Basically}: [reasoning].|[weakness] — {it's not where it should be|there's room to tighten it up}. {What that means in practice|Put simply}: [reasoning].}\n\n{I've already written up a fix — {it's{| pretty} straightforward|nothing complicated} — and {I'm happy to send it over at no charge|you're welcome to it, no charge}.|I've put together {a specific fix|the fix} for this. {No charge, no obligation|Totally free} — just {something|a change} you can {action|apply} right away.}\n\n{If that sounds useful, just reply and I'll{| get it} sent over.|Just reply if you'd like it.|{Interested?} Reply and I'll {send|forward} it over.}\n\n{Thanks|Best}", 39 "tone": "helpful", 40 "approach": "helpful-improvement", 41 "tested": false, 42 "conversions": 0, 43 "sends": 0, 44 "language": "en" 45 }, 46 { 47 "id": "freefix_email_04_ca", 48 "channel": "email", 49 "author": "[persona_name]", 50 "country": "CA", 51 "subject_spintax": "{[domain]: [weakness]|re: [weakness] on [domain]|FYI: [weakness] on your site}", 52 "body_spintax": "{{Hi|Hey|Hello} [firstname|there]{,|!}\n\n|}{[weakness] — {that's the specific thing I noticed|that's what caught my attention} when I looked at [domain].|I looked at [domain] and {one thing|something} {stood out right away|was hard to miss}: [weakness].}\n\n{[reasoning].|{Here's why that matters|Why it matters}: [reasoning].}\n\n{I've written up a fix for it — {nothing fancy, just a {clear|specific} change you can make {today|right now}|a clear, specific change}. And {I'm happy to send it over for free|it's yours if you want it, no charge}.|I've already put a fix together — {practical, specific, something you can {apply|action} today|not a vague suggestion, an actual change}. {It's yours at no charge|Happy to send it over for free}.}\n\n{Just reply and I'll send it over.|Reply and I'll get it to you.|{Drop me|Send me} a reply and it's yours.}\n\n{Thanks|Best}", 53 "tone": "specific", 54 "approach": "lead-with-weakness", 55 "tested": false, 56 "conversions": 0, 57 "sends": 0, 58 "language": "en" 59 }, 60 { 61 "id": "freefix_email_05_ca", 62 "channel": "email", 63 "author": "[persona_name]", 64 "country": "CA", 65 "subject_spintax": "{FYI: [domain]|quick one about [domain]|{noticed|spotted} something on [domain]}", 66 "body_spintax": "{{Hi|Hey|Hello} [firstname|there]{,|!}\n\n|}{Noticed [weakness] on [domain]. I've written a fix — reply and I'll send it over. No strings.|Spotted [weakness] on [domain]. Got {the fix|a fix} ready. Reply and it's yours — no catch.|[weakness] on [domain]. {Already got|I've got} the fix {written up|ready to go}. {Want it? Free, obviously.|Yours if you want it. No strings.}}\n\n{Thanks|Best}", 67 "tone": "punchy", 68 "approach": "short-three-sentence", 69 "tested": false, 70 "conversions": 0, 71 "sends": 0, 72 "language": "en" 73 }, 74 { 75 "id": "freefix_email_06_ca", 76 "channel": "email", 77 "author": "[persona_name]", 78 "country": "CA", 79 "subject_spintax": "{something I noticed on [domain]|re: [domain] — worth {a read|a look}|a thought about [businessName]'s website}", 80 "body_spintax": "{{Hi|Hey|Hello} [firstname|there]{,|!}\n\n|}{I've been looking at a lot of [industry] websites {lately|recently} and {I came across|stumbled across} [domain] {the other day|recently|this week}.|I spend {a fair bit of|a lot of} time reviewing [industry] websites — [domain] {came up|landed on my radar} {the other day|recently|this week}.|I review [industry] sites {for a living|professionally}. Came across [domain] {recently|the other day} and wanted to {flag|mention} something.}\n\n{Good site overall — you've clearly put {work|effort} into it. {But|And} there's {one thing|something} that {stood out to me|caught my eye}: [weakness].|{Nice {looking|clean} site|Solid site overall}. {One thing did stand out though|But one thing caught my eye}: [weakness].}\n\n{{It's not a big deal on its own|Sounds small, I know} — but [reasoning]. {And it's the kind of thing that quietly chips away at your results.|It compounds over time.}|{On its own it seems minor|Might seem trivial} — but [reasoning]. {Left alone, it just keeps {eroding|eating into} your numbers.|Over weeks and months, it really adds up.}}\n\n{I've already written up a {specific|clear} fix for it — {the kind of thing your web {person|developer} could drop in {in a few minutes|in under an hour}|something that takes maybe 10 minutes to apply}. {Happy to send it over at no charge.|It's yours if you want it — no charge, no catch.}|I went ahead and put together a fix — {practical, not vague|specific enough to action right away}. {No charge. Just reply and I'll send it.|Happy to {forward|send} it over for free.}}\n\n{Just reply and I'll{| get it} sent over.|Reply and I'll get it to you.|{Interested?} Just let me know.}\n\n{Thanks|Best}", 81 "tone": "conversational", 82 "approach": "personal-dad-style", 83 "tested": false, 84 "conversions": 0, 85 "sends": 0, 86 "language": "en" 87 } 88 ] 89 }